East Java
East Java is a province in the east of Java island. The administrative center of the province is located in Surabaya. Surabaya is the second largest city in Indonesia after Jakarta. It has a lot of amount of people too. The condition of Geographical in East Java, In south of East Java there is Java sea, In the east of East Java there is Bali strait, In north of East Java there is Hindia ocean, and In west of East java there is Central Java. Almost people who live in East Java are Javanese. East Java also hosts a significant population of other ethnic group, such as Chinese, Indian, and Arabs. Sometimes There are a lot of people come from Madura stay in East Java to looking for a job. Although there are many ethnic groups come to East Java, they can speak Javanese too. The main religion In East Java is Muslim. On the other side, they are Christian, Hinduism, and Buddhism. Tionghoa people is Konghucu, although almost religion Tionghoa people are Christian and Buddhism.
East Java's history dates back to the famous ancient kingdoms of Kediri and Singashari, which is now a city near Malang. The Majapahit empire, centered of Trowulan, Mojokerto. East Java has so many kinds of cultures. Ludruk is a famous theatre in East Java, usually all of the player of Ludruk are man. They can make the audience laugh. Because Ludruk is a funnies art and they also give sosial critics for the government. There are Remo dance and parikan too. If you want to see them in Surabaya, you can go to Cak Durasim festival or Balai Pemuda. They also sell a lot of strange art to make the foreigner come to Surabaya to see that. Kinds of painting are sell in that Festival. East Java also have tourism object too. You can go to Bromo Mountain if you want to feel the fresh air. There are Taman Safari Indonesia if you want to see a lot of kinds of animal. If you want to go there you should by car or bus. Because if you ride a motorcycle the wide animals will it you probably. In East Java there are beautiful beach and the scenery so wonderful too. In South beach there are Prigi beach, Pelang beach and Pasir putih beach in Trenggalek, Popoh beach in Tulungagung, Ngliyep beach in Malang, and Watu ulo beach in Jember. In north beach there are Tanjung kodok beach in Lamongan, then they change into famous tourism object called Wisata Bahari Lamongan ( WBL ). It same likes Jatim Park and Dufan. You can play the game and have picnic with your family. There are so many religion tourism for Muslim. If you want to see and know the history of Surabaya, you can go to Tugu Pahlawan Museum, Mpu Tantular Museum, Kapal selam monument, and House of Sampoerna museum. If you visit East Java, don't forget to try traditional food from the other city. Some famous culinary in East Java are Nasi Pecel from Madiun, Rawon, Rujak Cingur, Gado - gado, Soto Lamongan, and etcetera. You can find it in each of the city. Please come and visit if you want to know more about East Java.
East Java's history dates back to the famous ancient kingdoms of Kediri and Singashari, which is now a city near Malang. The Majapahit empire, centered of Trowulan, Mojokerto. East Java has so many kinds of cultures. Ludruk is a famous theatre in East Java, usually all of the player of Ludruk are man. They can make the audience laugh. Because Ludruk is a funnies art and they also give sosial critics for the government. There are Remo dance and parikan too. If you want to see them in Surabaya, you can go to Cak Durasim festival or Balai Pemuda. They also sell a lot of strange art to make the foreigner come to Surabaya to see that. Kinds of painting are sell in that Festival. East Java also have tourism object too. You can go to Bromo Mountain if you want to feel the fresh air. There are Taman Safari Indonesia if you want to see a lot of kinds of animal. If you want to go there you should by car or bus. Because if you ride a motorcycle the wide animals will it you probably. In East Java there are beautiful beach and the scenery so wonderful too. In South beach there are Prigi beach, Pelang beach and Pasir putih beach in Trenggalek, Popoh beach in Tulungagung, Ngliyep beach in Malang, and Watu ulo beach in Jember. In north beach there are Tanjung kodok beach in Lamongan, then they change into famous tourism object called Wisata Bahari Lamongan ( WBL ). It same likes Jatim Park and Dufan. You can play the game and have picnic with your family. There are so many religion tourism for Muslim. If you want to see and know the history of Surabaya, you can go to Tugu Pahlawan Museum, Mpu Tantular Museum, Kapal selam monument, and House of Sampoerna museum. If you visit East Java, don't forget to try traditional food from the other city. Some famous culinary in East Java are Nasi Pecel from Madiun, Rawon, Rujak Cingur, Gado - gado, Soto Lamongan, and etcetera. You can find it in each of the city. Please come and visit if you want to know more about East Java.

i think your paragraph is good enough.
BalasHapusYou describe a lot of east java.
so far so good..
Hey Girl,,
BalasHapusWhy did you dont describe about an interesting place in East Java or in Surabaya? But you described about East Java..
And our lecturer asked to us to make 3 paragraphs, but you just typed 2 paragraphs.
And still there are some mistakes in your writing..
That's all from my commment..
Commented by: Rulyana Oktorya (120810493 G)
your paragraph is quite great.
BalasHapusbut try to explain more specific on each of them.
you also made some grammar mistakes. check and correct them, okay?
Damasti Amandara
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your writing good enough..
BalasHapusbut,. you mention too much kinds of east java object..
I think only one,..
give me comment too,.thanks
Elok Lailiya (120810486G)
i think ur paragraph will better if u describe about one of famous food in east java, so u not only write the name but u describe.
BalasHapusnadz-hometown.blogspot.com
your paragraph is good enough ..
BalasHapusyou describe your paragraph with clear ..
but you should describe about interesting place in east java ..
that's all
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i think your paragraph is great
BalasHapusbut you should describe about special place in East Java that interesting.
hai gril,^_@...
BalasHapusby:wildania
your paragraph is good
there are a lot of mistake from grammar.
*don't forget to give me comment too!
yOur paragraph is good..:)
BalasHapusyou had explained about east java,,it's interesting,,but you wrote many topic sentences in your writing,,,i suggest you to choose one of them, or more.but not too much,,,,
but, so far you did a good joB!!
:)
thanks for your comment too!!!
by:Karina.R
Hmm.. All of my Friend,,
BalasHapusThanks for your comment,, i'll try to be a good writer..
Commented by :Pratiwi Ramandita 120810487G
i think you describe the east java clearly .
BalasHapusbut you didn't write about the things in east java more clearly .
but so far your paragraph is good .
im sorry that i late to comment your writing product .
keep in good writing . :)
hello dita..............
BalasHapusThis is my comment,
I think your writing is good and interesting!!!!
Because you describe the east java clearly.
That's all....
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